Very well drawn with the define lines. The pictures shows the story perfectly from the emotions on her face showing pain to the use of the elements used, such as the falling borders in the background. I especially love the small details, like the cracks in the floor at her feet and the way her jacket is blown back with the wind. the colors match perfectly and it looks very well colored. Overall i see that it is a wonderful drawing. I hope you make more of these. I would be looking forward to them. Keep on drawing! Amazing. Keep it on.
The details are fantastic in this work, you really get a sense of Lana's power not only with the floating chunks of earth in the background but the nice touch of the earth cracking under (his/her?) feet. You can tell this is part of an emotional scene due too the fact that Lana is crying as well as looking off to the viewers left (Lana's Right). That little detail draws the looker in wanting to know more about what is happening here. The main reason I think the originality suffers is the fact that a lot of "Fight Manga/anime" have done this kind of thing before. However because you where doing something that to some extent has been done it allowed you to work harder on making everything look right. So there are a lot of nice small details in the work, and due to those small details being there the impact of it is intensified so it makes for a very powerful piece (in my opinion anyways). I can tell that you have a really stronk idea of what you want to do and where this will go so personally I can't wait to see the next part
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